Days 170-171 *Another Afghanistan Poem*
For the veteran bloggerettes that have been with me on this blogger since the beginning, do u remember my "Christmas Poem" ? If ya dont, here it is again:
December 25th, 2004 Blog
Im not good with poems, but I figured that I know how to rhyme words a little so here it goes :)
Kandahar, Afghanistan....
Not a place for every man,
could easily get a tan;
just ask all the bearded Taliban!
Stuck here on Christmas Day;
where all the sand flies and scorpions play,
maybe holiday chow on a cardboard tray?
Must be dreaming, so slap me Ok?
Arriving back in June;
When all the blossoms are in full bloom,
Possibly singing a tune? While vacationing in Cancun?
Must be me drunk, barking at the moon.
Not very good at this writing thing;
Never could rock a beat or sing,
Doing my best to let our freedom ring;
In Afghanistan, where all American Soldiers are king :)
Well, on June 3rd, 2005 I am here again to attempt another poem...bear with me :)
For half a year its been 2005;
When I least expected it, time has flown by;
With snow in the mountains and hot desert gone dry;
Finally leaving this god forsaken place, I promise not to cry.
A week to go my friend, out of sight out of mind;
Have seen many different faces, everyone not always kind;
Been here for over 170+ days, not being able to wine and dine;
The USA is only a few steps away, so this place can kiss my freakin behind.
At the closing end of my journey, its about time for me to say good riddens;
Im done sleeping on floors, cots and a bed dirty with disgusting linens;
Has a love for Afghanistan gotten me smitten?
I hope you can answer that question for me, by reading the many blogs I've written.
How did I do? (lol) Its fun writing my mini-poems!

6 Comments:
Very nicely written Ricky! I am proud. It says how you feel in a few words, but I get the drift..also nice visuals!! I can't wait until you get back to the states and can have clean linens and all that..Not much going on here today..just babysitting Will, he will be 4 June 10th..makes me feel old b/c I have been watching him since he was 3 mo. old and his bro. Alex just turned 9 and I have been watching him since he was 3 (known him since he was 2 mo.) So whew! yea to that..Umm it is rainy here so prob. going to the mall..who knows..or stay here and do some crafts and play games..I have a bacheloretter party to go to 2nite..we are going to the hangers night club, just outside D.C.(haha,a bunch of men stripping, how exciting, lol) Should be a good time :-) Well that is about it g2 go get Alex ready for school and get Will dressed. Talk to you soon, much love, hope all is well..bye for now!
Nicole xoxo
P.S. I know this blog is about you Ricky, and sometimes I feel as if I get carried away about me and my life..sorry about that, if it comes across that way sometimes..I just want to keep you updated on life, not annoy anyone :-) I was just reading some previous blogs that is all and I thought about this..mmm k well I will talk to you soon..bye babes :-)
~Nicole xoxo
and PSS I sent an email to rcortez02@hotmail.com just so you know! mmmk for real now I am off here...
Bravo Ricky.
Nothing like a soldier with art.
Keep it going, it was neat.
Nothing much here.
Having the house painted. Excuse me, washed and painted. Must wash first.
It is an expensive journey. You kids don't know how lucky you are not to have house payments yet. See one day you will but just enjoy the here and now. When you are older you are expected to have homes. For now..... just chill and have fun.
Except for Nicole, sounds like she is already having too much fun already. (pssssssssst. naked guys?) in my day they would have been arrested for that........... phew.
Anyway, not going there with any more of that.
Can everyone say a little or big prayer for Vanessa? she was in a slight car accident yesterday. It wouldn't be so bad but the loser took off who hit her. She didn't get the license because she was knocked silly. I am praying taht someone saw something. I am praying for intense conviction for that woman to do what is right.
Gotta go. Doorbell. lol
hey kiddies.
Ricky, I thought of you today.
Mike is going out on his jet ski and said, wouldnt it be great if Ricky were here? Mike is actually thinking of becoming a big brother. He really enjoys the sporty life and I am so limited. He is so waiting for grandkids but I had to remind him that it takes awhile before he can play with them rough like that. He misses the sporty games and fun sometimes. Most men his age can't or won't play hard anymore. Not Mikey. No sirreeeee
Bye lads and lassies.
Talk later.......... mama
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Ricky-
hey babe- sorry i havent been on in a while...lots going on.
I love your new poem..lol. And- if for whatever reason you miss Afghanistan- i know you'll be loving USA much more- especially with clean linens and showers everyday...and good food.
Anyway- i cant waitto see you when you come home...lots to tell. Well...off to finish my laundrey and get packing for the coming weekend...
Faith
ps- nicole- we have to talk soon- sooo much to tell you!!!!!!
Maybe towards the end of the month i can come visit you....:-)
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